Selasa, 31 Mei 2011

MY BROTHER HOMO’S SPOUSE

“Ouch...”
“Bruumm...”
“Hey! You hit me! Don’t you see, you hurted my leg! Oh my clothes! My clothes became dirty!” Vi grumbled. But it was useless, the car that hit her has gone. The first misfortune of today. Vi stood up, then walked with a somewhat limping. Vi continued her grumbled until the school gate seen. Suddenly he stopped her grumbled, remembered something that could made her got the next misfortune.
The school gate was almost closed. The second misfortune. Vi ran and shouted with a full power. But her shouting got no attention from anybody. Unfortunately, the school gate was closed.
“Pak, would you please open the gate for me, please?.” Said Vi miserably. “I’m sorry I can’t help you child, I might be furied by the teacher.” With the pale face, Vi sit down in front of the gate and waiting to the miracle. Who knows, there will somebody want to open the gate and let him come to the class. But the miracle never came. She just draws a blank. She didn’t get anything.
“Hey. You’re praba’s little brother, aren’t you?” suddenly a man was standing in front of her. He startled and stood up. “Yes, I am. I am vi. You’re Alby, right? Praba’s friend. What are you doing here?”vi told. Albi smiled, “I want to enlisted my sister to this school. She wants to move to this school. You’re a student in this school, aren’t you? Why are you outside? Is this time for school period?
“Violet Adreana Prabarani! Come in!”A thin teacher called Vi. “Oh god, give me a miracle. Just make me disappear for a moment! Alby I’m so sorry, I must go inside, before the tin old man there, kill me with his power of his speech. See you.”Vi ran coming into school.
Break period. Vi sit in the canteen with three of her friends.
“I just saw you are chatting with a man in front of the gate this morning. Who is he?” Nina asked curiously. “Is he your boyfriend?” Nana who is Nina’s twin sister asked her too. “No. He is not. He is Alby, my brother’s friend, Praba. Why are you asking for him? Do you like him? It’s better to not.”Vi told her friend. “But, why? You said he is not your boyfriend. So it’s ok if there is another one like her. He is handsome , vi.” Finally Ageha stop eating and asked in order to take participate. Vi drank her green tea and ate the donuts. “He is weird!”then Vi drank her green tea again. Nana, Nina and Ageha was silent. Then vi continued, “Alby is a homosexual. He seens like has a relationship with my brother, Praba.” Everybody kept silent, listened to Vi’s story. Vi told that he that she had ever seen Alby in Praba’s bedroom, they were holding hands. And they didn’t come out for a long time. As like as a couple. “And unfortunately, I saw they are hug each other!”, Vi told her friends. Vi also told that they often eating together. According to Vi, it’s so weird if there are two mens hugged in the room. All of his friends don’t believe her story, but they just be silent. “Praba, how poor you are. I know you are not too handsome to get a girlfriend like miss universe, but why you are looking for a boy?” you can ask me to help you to get a girlfriend. It’s better than you make a relationship with Alby.” Vi said it and make they laugh together.
After school, Vi waited for a bus in front of her school. It has been a long time waiting for a bus, but the bus didn’t come. And then Vi remembered, her mathematic book was leave in her class and Vi must do her homework tonight and submit it tomorrow. “I must do it now or Mr. Panca will kill me! I must back to the class. Oh, it just wasting my time!” For a moment, Vi though, then she turned back and walked to the school gate. But, how unlucky Vi, the bus passed behind her. And when she turned back again, the bus disappeared in the bend on the road. It made Vi angry and forget her purpose, to take her mathematic book in her class. Vi stayed again, stood, and didn’t did anything, just dazed, waited for the bus while hold on her anger. Suddenly, a silver car stopped in front her. Vi remembered that car, it Alby’s car. Then Praba come out from that car, smiled and asked Vi to enter to the car. Vi rise her eyebrow, though for a moment, and finally entered to the car. In the car, Vi though, “Now I’m in the car with 2 human, and they are homosexual! How unlucky I’m.” and Vi imagine Praba and Alby, the hug, kiss, and Vi didn’t want to continued her imagination. She shakes her head until her hair wretched. Praba and Alby looked each other, didn’t understand what Vi did. And Vi aware what was she did, and she smiled to Praba and Alby. Praba and Alby looked each other again, and they laughed in the same time. And then Vi remembered she missed her math book in her class. How poor they are. They left the school was so far, and they must turned back, just for took Vi’s math book. But they suddenly laughed, their misfortune based from the unlucky girl, Vi. Vi just smiled and said sorry. But Praba and Alby smiled, but their smile. “it’s too easy, Vi. Now is the lunch time, and you make us late to get lunch. So, you must pay for our lunch!!” Vi didn’t have any excuse to say not. Vi just could nod, couldn’t say something. She think, “Damn! Today is the worse day ever!” Praba and Alby smiled. Smile of their glory.
Two weeks passed. The Alby’s sister that moved to Vi’s school was being Vi’s close friend. And Alby became more often come to Vi’s house, especially to the Praba’s room. It made Vi more suspicious with Alby and Praba. If Vi asked Alby why he always came to her house, Alby always answered, “I just want to meet Praba, and I want to look for our project.” In Vi’s head, “What project? It’s sound so weird!” But Vi didn’t want to ask Alby more than that, because she always imagine something that she didn’t want to imagine.
Sunday morning, Ruby, Alby’s little sister came to Vi’s house to did their homework. And Alby surely came too. But Alby immediately enter to Praba’s room. Than Vi asked Ruby, “Hey, do you feel something wrong with your brother? He looks like little eng…weird, right? I’m sorry to say that.” “I don’t think so. He just falling in love”, Ruby answered with the flat intonation. It made Vi felt something wrong with Ruby too. “Falling in love with whom? Doesn’t it sounds weird”, Vi asked Ruby again. “Hey, what’s wrong with you? Falling in love is not a weird thing. I think you got hit on your head, until you thing fall in love is a weird thing. Just do your homework before I do it for you.” Ruby stay in her flat intonation.
Vi felt useless to talk with Ruby. So she decided to ask Praba. “Praba, you are still a normal guy, right?” “You make me surprised. You were learning about knock the door before you come in, right? And what are you talking about? Of course I’m normal guy, that waiting for an amazing girl to love me. Hehehe… By the way, why are you asks me like that, sounds like you interrogating me. ”, said Praba. “But I ever seeing you and Alby hug each other, always eat together, holding hand, and Alby always stay with you in that room everyday and doesn’t go out for a long time. It makes me confuse, and suspicious too. Alby is in that room too. He just stood with opened mouth. Couldn’t believe what he is hearing about. Silence for a moment. And then Praba and Alby laughed and make Vi confuse. Vi told that she suspicious with them since they were always staying at Praba’s room. But she won’t asked them because she afraid if Praba and Alby were getting angry. But Praba and Alby, in fact they laughed and it made Vi more confused. For minutes they laughed, and then they stopped. They looked at Vi and even smile. Then Praba tried to tell Vi the truth. They often stay in Praba’s room because they were working for a secret project, which is playing Play Station! “We just playing Play Station, and I don’t somebody know and disturbing us.” Praba also told they often ate together because Alby didn’t like to eat alone, so Praba always accompanied Alby when Alby ate. “I’m a good friend and a good guy, so I didn’t mind to wasting my time just accompanied Alby, while I looking for a girl at restaurant or café.”
It made Vi felt freer of worry. But Praba refused to clarified one thing, which is about a hug between Praba and Alby. Praba asked Vi to ask Alby directly. Vi walked into Alby and asked him, “Why do you hug my brother? Do you like my brother?” Alby didn’t answer, he only smiled and tried to do not laugh. Impatiently Vi asked Alby again, “Do you love my brother? Better not, because Praba not a homosexual. Although Praba was not too handsome and stupid, but he is my brother who I love, so please do not disturb Praba!” Heard that statement, suddenly Alby laugh and made Vi confused. Then Alby calmly replied. "I hugged your brother because I’m happy." Vi was not satisfied with the answer Albi. She raised her eyebrow. "That's it? I didn’t believe it! Just because you were happy, you hugged my brother? “Vi still didn’t believe it.”But it was not the usual happy, that have been an extraordinary happy." Alby still replied calmly. Vi was still confused. Albi looked at Vi. "Because in that time Praba told me that you love me and you wish to be close to me. Vi suddenly remembered that he once told Praba that she likes Alby. After hearing the confession, Vi became embarrassed. Then Alby continued. “You were suspicious of me because I'm so close with your brother, right? And you forget if you love me. "These words make Vi embarrassed. Praba who had been silent, suddenly, he spoke. "There are people who say that if you judge people, you have no time to love them. It’s same like you are too busy to try to find Alby’s fact, and finally you forget your feeling.” Alby said, "But I am not a homosexual, so now you have remembered if you ever like me?" Vi only replied with a nod. Then everybody laughed, laugh at how stupid Vi in a hurry because of suspicions that she was think Alby is homosexual, and it made Vi forgot that she love Alby.

26 komentar:

  1. Hahaha...your story is so funny... :D
    You have told it, nicely..
    I like it..
    Keep and improve your ability, sis..

    BalasHapus
  2. same like andriyani's comment, your story is so funny... i like to read it...

    BalasHapus
  3. Your story is very interesting and it is so funny. I thought Praba and Alby were really homosexual. I never predicted both of them playing play station in Praba’s room. You made this story very well sist. Two thumbs up for you.
    I think that’s all from me. Thank you for the story. Bye…

    BalasHapus
  4. hahahaha ... Your story is very interesting for me. I think they're really gay, it was not. The selection of your words is very good. I like it.

    BalasHapus
  5. ehhmm good story girL...
    you made a story about homosexual but at the end you can explaine that they're not really homosexual, so don't judge a book by it's cover!!!

    BalasHapus
  6. From the tittle I thought that you may wrote aboutt our classmates, agus and yoga. hahahha (I'm kidding :)
    In your story you give an unpredictable ending. One important thing to learned by this story is: Don't ever judge people, when we judge people we have no time to love them. I love this quote very much ^^

    BalasHapus
  7. I can't stop to laugh after read your story.. :D
    like ara said I also thought that the story is about our classmates ;P.. hopefully it will be the next series..

    BalasHapus
  8. 1. It is unique story. The story tells how the people try to clarify a trust. I like reading your story because people can not guess the ending of the story. From my identification during reading this story, there are some weaknesses must be corrected; those are some grammatical errors that should be repaired, sentences that make the reader felling confuse, the idea should arrange well, and the tenses, the tense should in past but in some paragraph, there is simple present tense such as in this sentence “But I ever seeing you and Alby hug each other, always eat together, holding hand, and Alby always stay with you in that room everyday and doesn’t go out for a long time. It makes me confuse, and suspicious too. Alby is in that room too”

    BalasHapus
  9. haha...
    your story is so funny,
    good job, you make me can't stop to laugh :D
    good imagination :D
    first i guess the end alby and praba are homo, but i am wrong :D
    good good...

    BalasHapus
  10. haha...
    your story is so funny,
    good job, you make me can't stop to laugh :D
    good imagination :D
    first i guess the end alby and praba are homo, but i am wrong :D
    good good...

    the anonim above me, is ME :)

    GEKVIE..
    (NOVITA SARI)

    i'm so sorry because i can't post my comment by my blog ID..

    BalasHapus
  11. Nice story sist... I like your story, so funny... hehehe...
    Good job, I like it... :)

    BalasHapus
  12. i can't stop laughing when read your story...it's very interesting me....so, don't judge the book only by the cover...

    BalasHapus
  13. great story. and you are very brave to write this one. good job honey. :3


    but, please check the grammar.
    keep writing, ya?
    sorry that i can't read all of them and jumped one to another, but i have already kept it as my file in my ontaem. so, i can read it every time. :3

    BalasHapus
  14. Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.

    BalasHapus
  15. the last paragraph of your story is unpredictable. I like this sentence so much, "if you judge people, you have no time to love them".
    hah, It realizing me about the way to love...hehehe
    but, you made some mistakes. You sometimes replace Vi into "he or his"..you have to revise it...
    nice story sist...:)

    BalasHapus
  16. your story so unique,, Rarely do people make a story like yours, the story is full of moral values​​. I like it... ^^

    BalasHapus
  17. hahaha..can't stop laughing..vi was so funny..your story is nice, ta! but better if you pay attention to grammar.. you have to think whether you will use past tense or present tense..

    BalasHapus
  18. you made a funny story..i like it..but you have to revise some mistakes there....overall....it's a nice job..

    BalasHapus
  19. Same like the other, your story make me laugh. You made an entertaining funny story. I like your story. Good job.

    BalasHapus
  20. hOMo....apparently their the tricked ...hahaha

    funny story,,,,good job..like it

    BalasHapus
  21. hahahaha, it's a nice funny story sist! the ending of your story can answer all the question in my mind when I read your story. it's really entertain me :)

    BalasHapus
  22. Hahaha.. It’s so funny. At the first, I imagined that Ruby and Alby have a special relationship. You have created the great flot in your story. So, the readers can’t guess the ending easily if they don’t read until the end of the story. But, please be careful with tenses that you have used in your story. Most of the sentences use past tense. I guess that you want to tell the story in the past. Am I right? I think the sentence “She shakes her head until her hair wretched” is not the past tense’s structure. Besides, remember that in the negative form, you should use Verb 1! “Vi stayed again, stood, and didn’t did anything.” I think, didn’t do anything is the correct one. 

    BalasHapus
  23. now,,,, i'm a little bit confuse on your story.....how should i say about it?funny or sad? i think it should be both of them....you extend your idea to be strange story.... you are great... .

    BalasHapus
  24. your story is very funny...
    i don't think you will write a story like this. usually girl write a story about love, but it nice....

    BalasHapus
  25. Your story is very interesting and it is so funny. really love to read your story sist...

    BalasHapus
  26. Same like the other. Your story is funny. I like it. The beginning story, I can’t guess the ending your story will like that. You have a good idea. Good job, ta.. :)

    BalasHapus